My Sunrise
by resplendence
(Poetry/Lyrics, 1368 views) - 3/16/04
(recorded 3/16/04 @ 12:51:51 PM)
Let me capture your thoughts
Then give me some time
To learn to think like you
I'll captivate your mind
The way you flow through mine
Just rise from the heights that surround you

You could be my sunrise

Though the awe in the scene
Might serve to take my sight
Proceed to take my breath
I'm certain I'll learn to live without
Just rise from the heights that surround you

You could be my sunrise

You could be my sight
You could be my breath
You could be my life
I'll learn to live without

I'll captivate your heart
The way you hold to mine
Just rise from the heights that surround you

You could be my sunrise
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Notes:
hmm, i get a loss of indepedence vibe from that. Scares the crap out of me.

   [Savvy (J) 3/16/04 2:25 PM]



I like this piece... I think I read it once... or you played it for me. I can't remember. Either way, it's good. But... maybe a little *too* saccharin?

   [disillusioned (J :: M) 3/16/04 5:01 PM]



Would you be terribly upset if I put my own music to that?

   [enlite (J :: M) 3/16/04 9:47 PM]



This is one of my own songs that I have written as a solo project that I plan on eventually releasing. I would not be upset if you put your own music to it, I just ask that I would be given credit for the lyrics if anything were ever to become of the song and also just keep in mind that I would like to eventually go public with all of my original material.

Thanks for your interest in my lyrics.

   [resplendence (J) 3/16/04 11:56 PM]



Okay. My only interest is my own personal amusement.

   [enlite (J :: M) 3/17/04 12:11 AM]



I, personally, love it, And my deepest apologies to you....I don't really know what to say...you amaze me

   [Cauterize (J) 3/20/04 11:52 PM]



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